So I’m working on another passion project and I’m hoping some fellow forum members would find joy in being part of it on some level.
I’m fairly familiar with the Ra materials, while far from an expert, so any feedback from the community would be very much appreciated,
are the lyrics compatible with the material as you know it?
any details that feels off the mark or in need of tweaking?
any elements that feels left out in context of the song’s focus?
any suggestions for a few lines to add as an intro?
The lyrics are as follows and the floor is open
Preliminary Tile:
Paths of Light and Shadow
[intro]
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[Verse 1 – The Crossroads]
Two roads wind through the endless sky,
One holds the weight of “me” and “mine.”
The other sings with hands held wide,
A voice that whispers, “yours and mine.”
[Pre-Chorus – The Choice]
Oh, the stars, they wait in silence,
Watching how the heart decides.
Will I claim or will I offer?
Will I darken or will I rise?
[Chorus – The Calling]
If love is light, then let it guide me,
Through the veil and through the storm.
If power calls, will I be blinded?
Or break the chains
and become reborn
[Verse 2 – The STS Path]
A tower stands with walls so high,
Built from hunger, built from pride.
A voice inside says, “Take, ascend,
Rule the weak, make fate bend.”
[Pre-Chorus – The Cost]
But the stars, they wait in silence,
Watching how souls divide,
One hand grasping, one hand open,
One heart lost and one alive.
[Chorus – The Calling, Reprise]
If love is light, then let it guide me,
Through the veil and through the storm.
If power calls, will I be blinded?
Or break the chains
and become reborn
[Bridge – The STO Path]
To serve the One is to serve the all,
To hear the voice behind the wall.
I step beyond myself and see,
That all I give returns to me.
[Outro – The Realization]
Two roads wind through the endless sky,
But only one will lead me high.
Not by taking, not alone—
Love in give and receive
is the practice of no-condone